The following corrections will help the English learner to use the language coherently. Remember 'usage' is more important than grammar, but the learners should never go overboard on English language usage or grammar, while speaking. Proficiency comes with time!
1) He took admission in the university - Frequent in India, Pakistan, and Bangladesh
He gained admission to the university - Correct Usage
2) I cleared my exams - Frequent in Pakistan
I passed my exams......................Correct Usage
3) He has become healthy(overweight)-------Popular usage in Pakistan
He has become overweight Correct Usage
4) I need informations Popular usage in Pakistan
I need information(uncountable) Correct Usage
I need a piece of information Correct Usage
I need some information Correct Usage
5) I am going to give my exam - Frequent in India, Pakistan and Bangladesh
I am going to take my exam - Correct Usage
6) Make a photo(camera) - Frequent in Russia
Take a photo - Correct Usage
7) I am student - Frequent in Russia and Brazil and other countries
I am a student - Correct Usage(Verb be + article + countable noun)
8) I like your dressing(clothes) - Frequent in Pakistan
I like your dress - Correct usage
Dressing is a sauce for flavour enhancement
Dressing is a pad to cover the wounds
1) He took admission in the university - Frequent in India, Pakistan, and Bangladesh
He gained admission to the university - Correct Usage
2) I cleared my exams - Frequent in Pakistan
I passed my exams......................Correct Usage
3) He has become healthy(overweight)-------Popular usage in Pakistan
He has become overweight Correct Usage
4) I need informations Popular usage in Pakistan
I need information(uncountable) Correct Usage
I need a piece of information Correct Usage
I need some information Correct Usage
5) I am going to give my exam - Frequent in India, Pakistan and Bangladesh
I am going to take my exam - Correct Usage
6) Make a photo(camera) - Frequent in Russia
Take a photo - Correct Usage
7) I am student - Frequent in Russia and Brazil and other countries
I am a student - Correct Usage(Verb be + article + countable noun)
8) I like your dressing(clothes) - Frequent in Pakistan
I like your dress - Correct usage
Dressing is a sauce for flavour enhancement
Dressing is a pad to cover the wounds